Areas where I need to/have improved:
1. Making the speech entertaining - While running for a state office, I had to make a public speech to accompany my campaign. One of the biggest mistakes I made was that I focused solely on substance and what I wanted to change in the organization. I put minimal work into making my speech entertaining, which was really important given my audience: middle and high school kids who lacked long attention spans.
One of my competitors made a speech with a reference to a popular movie. This immediately got people's attention and made the speech engaging and entertaining. In comparison, my speech was more content-based, but less interesting. I learned from this mistake and came back the following year to make a speech that had a better balance of content and entertainment. At the time, Frozen was a very popular movie, so I made an analogy using Frozen that made people interested while also explaining my content effectively. I think I also had an effective grabber in my RCL speech that made it more interesting.
2. Standing behind the podium - I made this mistake both years that I ran for state office. While the podium was tempting because I could have notes on it, it really inhibited my physical connection to the audience. I learned from this mistake, and in my RCL speech, I spoke from the side of the podium, where I could still access the computer, but was able to make a connection with the audience.
3. Body language/gestures - When practicing for my RCL speech in the Speaking Center, I made too many hand gestures, so I decided that I would hold my notes in both hands. While this strategy was effective for reducing hand movement, it made me appear stiff. I definitely need to work on this going forward. I would also like to incorporate physical body movement in the future. I just wasn't sure how to time it for my RCL speech.
4. Eye contact - I did make eye contact during my RCL speech, but it was too fleeting. I was trying to balance between making people feel uncomfortable and not making any eye contact. I need to work on knowing exactly how long I should "talk" to a particular individual in the audience.
It sounds like you have a really good awareness of your strengths and weaknesses as a speaker. Not only are you aware, but your are making a conscious effort to improve upon your weaknesses. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteLisa, in my personal opinion, I think you are being way to critical of yourself! From what I Gather from your RCL speech, you made a lot of great eye contact. I feel like you made the distinguish between awkward and comfortable. Also, I do agree with you; body language is highly important. We just watch a 20 minute video about it just now lol. But yes, making the speech entertaining is very hard because you do not want to over flood it with humor and or entertainment and miss the important content!
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